Notice of Intention for New York Department of Health & Mental Hygiene
This text was selected to be reviewed and revised for stylistic errors. After I decided what corrections needed to be made, I wrote a letter to the author to explain the major errors and how to adjust them.
Memo to Author of Notice of Intention
This letter was designed to address stylistic issues from the selected text in Notice of Intention. In basic terms, I explain to the author what the error is and how to correct it. Some of the themes discussed in this letter include cohesion and coherence.
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